Blue Octo looks really neat. I love how its like a jelly fish sort of thing. however I do not like your sig at all. The text and colors do not go at all. I think that if you can make somethign like Blue Octo you could do a lot more work to your sig to make it much better. I would change the font you are using and that like bloch around it. I would also make it that cool blue color you have in the other instead of the inverse look. Well thats just my opinion and you can leave it however you want. But otherwise that looks pretty good for a first complete work in c4d.
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