Il give you my two cents..


1) is there a particular reason the layout isn't exactl centered? Maybe its just me but it looks like its on the left a little too much.

2) the colors are okay, but for some reason it feels strongly "template"ish. The blues and yellows kind of try to push the viewers eyes around. its hard to find something to look at.

3) the content is extremely confusing. Centering your text (on any layout) is usually a bad thing to do. Try 'Justify' instead. And...get MORE. You have tons of space and 90% of it is empty.

4) The headers for the content are extremely hard to read. Your choice of font overall is not very creative and makes the legibility almost inexistent. Try a bitmap based font, or raise the size of the current font. Either way, do something.

5) the header is okay, It fits the theme and purpose of the site, I guess. But it just feels like you put barely any effort into it. Seems likes a 10 minute slap-together job.

Altogether your site looks like it has potential. But it lacks direction and is very confusing at first glance. You need to figure out where you want to go with this site, and then outfit with content accordingly. It's extremely hard to design a successful site without planning the content you want to use before you create the site. Obviously this creates a problem with space (whether not enough or in your case too much).

Keep working at it!

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