uhhh.. i tried one of these before.. it was just as bad.. anyways

1. sky is too full of stars.. i read a sweet tut one time explaining how to make a starfield.. and balls my outcome was ugly

2. the big lens flare is too.. flarey

3. planet is too big.. plus the stars overlap it.. which doesn't fit

4. no offense.. but you did horrible cutting on the mountains and water.. smooth it out.. add a little brushing.. maybe a little misty or something.. make it nice

5. keep going.. more you practice better you get.. i quit trying to do large canvases after my first one.. and now i am too lazy to learn

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