I appreciate the effort with that last piece, but I think you are trying too hard. To a certain degree, there is a difference between produces something creative and producing a jubilation of many different ideas. That's what I figure with your last one. I do not have any experience with photoshop, but I can be first to say that there are way to many colors in that piece for it to be considered "pretty." I guess what I am saying is that it needs to be visually appealing. That doesn't mean lose your idea framework altogether, but try to make intertwine colors that work affectionately, do not delude so much from the focal point, and maybe a little less abstract.

When I look at that, though it is indeed computer art, I do not retain in my head that I am looking at a girl. It really takes away from the idea itself when you add what seem like an arbitrary mix of colors around her face. That just doesn't work with me. I would like to see maybe three or four consistent colors.

Again, let me point out that I appreciate your valid effort, but feel as if
some of your work could be made more simple with the same visual pleasure. Then again, that is mostly my perception on how art should be, and not necessarily what you have to do. But keep working at it man; keep posting your work on boards and taking comments. That's a grand way to improve. I hope mine have helped to say the least.

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