Interesting.

I like the background, I think one of your main problems is the stocks are sticking out like a sore thumb.

Try to incorporate the sprites in the piece instead of making a background and placing it somewhere.

But I can see you're taking some steps to try that, but I think that bit in the foreground looks wacky and overdone.

But not bad.

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