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Old 02-10-2005, 07:22 PM

new renders... O_o

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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15002258/
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Old 02-10-2005, 08:06 PM

damn those took a long time to load.

The magma one is alright, i like the color and the theme is definately there. Once thing though is i think it doesnt explode enough. I mean, you have the right idea. But there is not realism in your explosion, it looks flat behind the render. The brushing should ro right into the render at different layers and levels so that it appears to be just as 3d as the render.

@ the second, i like the colors, but i think thats all it has going. I like the shine effect, but thats about it. The rest doesnt appeal that much. Maybe a sig out of it would be cool though.
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Old 02-10-2005, 08:19 PM

the texts are pretty interesting =) and creative IMHO

I like the brushing job, overall it looks like a nice piece (both)
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Old 02-10-2005, 08:22 PM

alright. thanks i got lazy on the top and didnt really do much to it as i guess you can see there.
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Old 02-10-2005, 09:15 PM

yea getting lazy is a bad thing. I would just stop if you cant do anymore brushing, and pick up at it again later on.
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Old 02-11-2005, 01:48 PM

Franken, if your really lazy you should become a programmer!

BTW: Good renders man.
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Old 02-11-2005, 02:11 PM

my nickname is slacker....
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Old 02-11-2005, 08:26 PM

Eh it says you didnt do the first render so i wont rate that. I'll rate your brushing, which is good. you use textured brushing a lot, but it looks flat. You need to give it a sense of breath and depth so that it has more of a feeling of 3d to it.
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Old 02-11-2005, 09:58 PM

hmm... alrighty i shall work on my renders lol and my brushin to make it... breath.
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Old 02-11-2005, 10:31 PM

breath is a term i hate and despise because its fucking confusing... just think depth and more 3d ish.
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Old 02-12-2005, 01:51 AM

depth is the word needed here. breathe just doesnt wokr right.
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Old 02-12-2005, 02:09 AM

1st one is pretty good, but like everyone has said, it looks flat. Try using Filters > Distort > Pinch to give it a little depth.

2nd one is alright. I really like how it changes colors. Not too bad.
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