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Old 04-28-2005, 10:16 PM

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Honestly, I'm not sure if I really want to release this one... I'm not living up to standards that I once was oh so long ago, I hope one day to be as good as I once was. (It's bad when your discouraged by looking at your own stuff)
Therefore, I give this to you now to heavily critique, so I can improve it and then hopefully release it later
Anywho, flame this away:
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Old 04-28-2005, 10:19 PM

looks like you duplicated your first object and rotated / moved it. I dunno, but if it is, i would have liked to see more varience. Some of the brushing seems like its just there for brush sake. I would have also like a more centralized point in which the piece stems from. Something that pulls it together (but for gods sake, dont make it an energy blast)
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Old 04-28-2005, 10:20 PM

Good eye on the duplication, I was fiddling with layers to try and give it some shadows, depth. Brushing, thats hell for me right now.
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Old 04-28-2005, 10:40 PM

It's fucking huge. I agree with sicloan though with everything he stated. The render is nice.
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Old 04-28-2005, 11:07 PM

I mighta made it a bit too big for a first time :/
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Old 04-28-2005, 11:39 PM

i fucking love you, sir, and im glad to see you're back. Always knew you'd be back. Anyway, i cant see the duplication but the brushing needs more depth.
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Old 04-29-2005, 03:02 PM

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It's fucking huge. I agree with sicloan though with everything he stated. The render is nice.
ya wat he said.... i love your work
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Old 05-01-2005, 05:15 AM

man nice job..... in what program had u dont it??? photoshop???
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Old 05-01-2005, 07:03 AM

I love your style so much tweak, very nice piece.
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Old 05-01-2005, 07:16 AM

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man nice job..... in what program had u dont it??? photoshop???
he used a 3d program like c4d and then he brushed it with photshop
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Old 05-01-2005, 09:04 AM

thats ugliest work from you Twk,
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Old 05-01-2005, 09:21 AM

Freakin' awesome.

Extremely large, very bold colors, I like it.

It almost sucks you into it.
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Old 05-01-2005, 07:48 PM

definately not as good as your earlier work, but its not horrible. now that sic mentioned it i can see the duplication and the brushing could be... better. not bad nice work
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Old 05-18-2005, 09:11 PM

that is... godly
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Old 05-18-2005, 09:14 PM

It lacks reason. It is just messily going anywhere. There is no focal point or anything. It really needs one or your eyes tend to not want to look at the whole thing
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Old 05-19-2005, 03:04 AM

I agree it just looks like a mess, I quite like the brushing, though I can see the duplicated parts. Try and make the render more focused, zoom out or something so we can see a specific shape. Maybe you should try practicing ambience, by having a that render zoomed out and spiralling through the center, you can then brush around the outside with a black background.
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Old 07-30-2005, 05:47 PM

i deffinately cant see anything wrong.. but im pretty new to this. well twk, i think your awsome. i always check out your work on deviant and it inspires everything i try to create.
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