my first real render..

10-02-2004, 09:55 PM

my first real render..

what do you think? i need major tips on what to do.. this is waht i have so far. c4d->ps7.
like i said this is my first really render, my others were crap and didnt really make it to the brushing stage... so comments please.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/11098810/

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10-02-2004, 10:10 PM

Not bad. The render is okay for your first time, but it doesnt really work as anything abstract. I've seen alot of these so they dont really apeal to me as much as some stuff does.

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10-02-2004, 10:39 PM

yeah. im going through a inspiration block right now... i cant really create any thing very original... wether its somthing for my site, or questions to ask seth macfarlane. :'(

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10-03-2004, 03:46 AM

mm I agree with sicloan, the render is nice but doesn't really suit the abstract, although it looks really nice in your sig (if thats the same render).

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10-03-2004, 10:15 AM

Yea its the lower right part of the dev art. That part i do agree with. That looks really good.

A good rendering tip: Render with perspective, and then in photoshop change your renders perspective as well. That will make your renders much more dynamic!!

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10-03-2004, 10:44 AM

so like move it around once in ps?

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10-03-2004, 11:32 AM

Have you ever played with perspective in PS? EDIT > transform > perspective.

You can get much nicer looking renders when they have alot more depth to them.

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10-03-2004, 05:43 PM

no. i've never ever used that. ill have to give that a go on the next one.

like with this one... what should i add.. its boring and obviously needs mroe but i just dont know what to add..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/11127753/

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10-04-2004, 08:16 PM

I tried it and people said I got bad quality render =/

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10-04-2004, 08:51 PM

aww

that stinks.

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10-04-2004, 09:33 PM

You guys should learn how to use perspective in c4d. You can change your layout so its a perspective map and things litterally launch out at you. if you do it right. i believe http://www.surreal-utopia.com/ has some video tuts on it.

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10-05-2004, 03:23 AM

oh cool. i played with perspective in photoshop. its cool iguess, ill have to use it on one of my renders. i think my problem is that i dont know what to do when i get to the brushing stage, my renders are alright but i just freeze up when it comes to brushing.
ill check out the tuts later after school.

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10-05-2004, 09:07 AM

you're brushing isn't that bad, use tweaks tuts to help, but what I reckon you really need is some decent backgrounds, pure black just doesn't cut it

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10-05-2004, 06:10 PM

yeah i never know what to do for the back ground. i brushed a whole bg ill post the link in a minute hold on.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/11181624/

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10-06-2004, 01:56 AM

I want to make renders to but i need a tut for 3ds max or maya

I think it looked nice btw

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11-12-2004, 03:52 AM

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I want to make renders to but i need a tut for 3ds max or maya

I think it looked nice btw

Ditto,
i'm useless in C4D....any good tut sites with good render tuts?

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11-12-2004, 08:25 AM

did you check out our 3d tutorial section yet? we have a couple. also i would search google or look at deviantart.com resources section.

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