Collaboration

11-02-2004, 12:27 PM

Collaboration

well this is my first collab ever, which I did with Fujakura he did the render I coloured it in and did the brushing and 2d.

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11-02-2004, 03:22 PM

that looks really cool. i like the reflection, but the red circle on the left looks a little flat on one side and it bugs me. you did a good job with the tech, i think so atleast. the wave at the bottom of the white part i find weird and a little over accentuated. good work though, to both of you.

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11-02-2004, 04:11 PM

you mean on the render? If so I agree, it breaks the flow of the render.

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11-02-2004, 04:22 PM

i dont like the rings. Everything else looks decent. on sicloans scale i'd give it a 6/10 . Its a decent colab, the render isnt difficult to make, the tech fits okay with it but the overall piece is nothing special.

keep at it though, your getting better!

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11-03-2004, 05:46 AM

yeah I agree, to be honest I really wanted to go for a dark and magical style but the render (to me) only seemed to go with a techy sort of background and 2d style. Thanks for all the feedback good and bad, I prefer to hear the truth

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11-06-2004, 03:26 PM

tech brushes.... ?

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11-07-2004, 11:35 AM

tech brushes and pen tool and transforming

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11-07-2004, 02:50 PM

k... then i cant really rate it based on work because it seems like all you did was tech brush over it, add the transparancy and the circles.

No offense intended, i just prefer to rate on how much you did and how it looks.

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