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12-03-2005, 02:18 AM

my showcase

heres a showcase of some of my work tell me wat you think and plz rate them

you will have to click the next few links to see wat they are like

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1...blosigcopy.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1...round2copy.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1...omesigcopy.jpg

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12-03-2005, 09:45 AM

Re: my showcase

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http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1...omesigcopy.jpg

Why's it look like he's got a pair of balls hanging off his chin?

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12-03-2005, 10:51 AM

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Its a beard, dumbtit.

Anywho, they are all pretty bad dude, the last one is ok but still.. lacking.

Keep at it.

I'd rate them about a 4.

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12-03-2005, 11:27 AM

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The thing that bothres me the most aobut them is the font... and the whorrid borders.

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12-03-2005, 12:09 PM

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They all are the same technique. I've seen it a million times before. Try some new stuff!

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12-03-2005, 12:41 PM

Re: my showcase

<3

composition just works

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12-04-2005, 07:25 AM

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text and border sucks inmy opinion

and seems like way too trendy grunge style...

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12-04-2005, 08:44 AM

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12-05-2005, 08:05 AM

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ok i understand you dont like tham but just look at your own they are all also crap

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12-05-2005, 09:30 AM

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hahahaha

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12-05-2005, 01:18 PM

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ok i understand you dont like tham but just look at your own they are all also crap

Woah, before you go any further:

http://www.visualdesigncore.com/showthread.php?t=3415

Have a great fucking day.

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12-05-2005, 01:50 PM

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tune dont be a fucking ass hole and degrading people's works here. you were new once too.. you sucked and didnt really know what you were doing, you hadnt developed your own style yet. so to defend yourself dont show other peoples works because thats just fucking immature.
and instead of seeming all big and saying it sucks give tips on how they can improve their pieces and become better, dont just post a picture of garbage because it doesnt help them learn, it only turns them away from this site... i dont care if people leave because they think you're all fucking dicks but im sure the ones paying the bills for this do.

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12-07-2005, 07:43 AM

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thanxs for that turbo at least i have one person on this site that might want to back me up and not dis everything i do!

got anytips cos i am pretty new to this and i dont really know how to create my own style (i followed tuts to do most opf these) i find photoshop easy to use when using tuts but i still dont know wat sort of things evreything does so got any tips

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12-07-2005, 09:00 AM

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My advice, ditch the borders, they subtract from the pieces themselves. Also, check out dafont.com and download some good fonts. Forget using bevel and embose for any font, atleast in my opinion. In some cases, the image dosn't blend in at all with the background, por ejemplo, Lora Croft. - Sniph

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12-07-2005, 10:48 AM

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tuts are a good way to learn the features photoshop has to offer, but if you follow them exactly it doesnt help you much as an artist. follow tuts and change some steps to get your own results then branch off and soon you can make stuff on your own with out tuts or anything. once you learn the filters and everything you will be able to do alot with photoshop that tuts wont teach you. try doing works that are bigger than sigs, like wallpaper or somthing like that.
for just learning photoshop your sigs really arent that bad, but when making one you have to take into consideration; the text, render(if you use one), the color, border and background for the most part. i think there was a tut on this site on how to make a sig that flows, or somthing similar to that, or how to get good text, you shoudl check it out.

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12-08-2005, 01:04 PM

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tyvm for all the advice ill take it into consideration and post a new one in here soon

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12-08-2005, 01:47 PM

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<3

But i hate sigs all together lol

Even though thats how i started

Try to go big

Sigs for the lose

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12-09-2005, 12:14 PM

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depth and lighting and colors... you need

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12-09-2005, 12:18 PM

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Renzo?!

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12-09-2005, 01:39 PM

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ok i tried a new one but i dont know wat text to put on it and where to put it but i did this one without a tut what do you think?

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12-09-2005, 01:43 PM

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ok i tried a new one but i dont know wat text to put on it and where to put it but i did this one without a tut what do you think?

I r not a fan of grunge but i think you blended it to sharply

Let me see if i can try and exlpain this best as i can

You should leave more of spwan in the image and make him a little bigger then make the blend longer so it doesnt happen so fast

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12-10-2005, 02:07 AM

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ahem

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<3

composition just works

(NB: lol, funny to see tune get shut down)

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12-10-2005, 02:13 AM

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sorry avalon i must have missed that post ty m8

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12-10-2005, 02:25 AM

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its all good ^_^

andway, you look like ur heading the right way art-wise; i'm sure you'll develop a lot as you practice

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12-10-2005, 06:28 AM

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ive done another one wat do you think (i didnt use any brushes)

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