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Old 05-01-2006, 05:50 PM

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Old 05-01-2006, 06:27 PM

Re: Kill..zone..?
liking that lighting effect
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Old 05-01-2006, 06:44 PM

Re: Kill..zone..?
text is poop (don't remove it, just make it better, from colour and texture and stuff), but i do like that backround and light.
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Old 05-01-2006, 07:25 PM

Re: Kill..zone..?
Will do a bit later.

Thanks for the input
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Old 05-03-2006, 04:33 PM

Re: Kill..zone..?
Nice use of the clone tool, the lens flare could be toned down a bit so it's not so prominent. Text just needs work.
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Old 05-03-2006, 04:55 PM

Re: Kill..zone..?
pipes to the left of the douche would look better blurred, and negative space is pretty uninteresting (put some subtle details). text isn't that bad, maybe but a design behind it or a long line of 6px text under it.

and make your clone tooling less obvious.
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Old 05-03-2006, 09:03 PM

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I duped the layer and just erased. ;\

Oh well, first time delving into shit like this anywho.
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