boar ehd

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08-31-2006, 03:34 AM

boar ehd

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08-31-2006, 05:38 AM

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I don't know what to say, except: I hate it. The colors are just... not good.

Hopefully an artist can be more constructive.

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08-31-2006, 02:42 PM

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Yeah.. it is pretty bad. I thought it was from Bit or something at first glance.

anyway, hmm.. the colours are just really chaotic and clash, not to mention the red is just too pure red. the stock is very low quality, everything is over contrasted, and the black spots just look lazy. overall, its just not at all cohesive and looks pretty amatureish.

you can do much better than this

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08-31-2006, 04:15 PM

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I'd take offence, but to be honest, it really is too messy, which is basically my style.

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08-31-2006, 05:55 PM

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I don't think it's that bad, I like it better than your current. the type throws it all of though yo, and despeckle it or something.

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08-31-2006, 06:10 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Doctor

the type throws it all of though yo

wha?

(thanks)

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08-31-2006, 11:33 PM

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I like it a lot except for the text.

Something about it makes me love it.

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09-01-2006, 12:43 AM

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The dark BG smothers it. Ntm, dark rust and yellow+rainbow text=turd.

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