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Old 01-20-2007, 09:34 AM

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Messing around smudging some renders. They're both essentially the same thing.
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Old 01-20-2007, 02:34 PM

Re: smudged renders
They still pop out to much despite smudging.
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Old 01-20-2007, 04:02 PM

Re: smudged renders
^^ditto

also the smudging tecnnique in first one should be improved.
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Old 01-20-2007, 06:46 PM

Re: smudged renders
yeah on the 1st you can see which brush got used for smudging



haha now it looks like it's dropping glowing confetti in space. Not sure ... looks distorted just for the sake of it.
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Old 01-21-2007, 07:33 PM

Re: smudged renders
The seond one is actually pretty good. however, that big blocky text just ruins it all. text should be smaller and more subtle. a nicer font wouldn't hurt either. It could also be really nice if there was a bit more colour in the background, to match the plane.
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Old 01-22-2007, 02:09 PM

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I'd take the point about the gross-ness of the text relative to everything else but I liked the sort of techy style font to go with the gamertag itself and that the whole thing's a nod to a computer game. 3rd and final edit:
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Old 01-22-2007, 06:57 PM

Re: smudged renders
VERY nice. big improvement over the previous two.
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