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Old 05-02-2007, 09:54 PM

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I fixed a few things up idk mabye i should just start over. Need some ideas though. Nothing is clicking
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Old 05-02-2007, 10:07 PM

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It's just kidna boring with nothing going on in the middle.



Maybe add some clouds pooping rainbow-colored lollipops, and then we'll talk.
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Old 05-02-2007, 10:16 PM

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haha whats up with the rainbow loli pops?
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Old 05-02-2007, 10:52 PM

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I think your scale is off, which makes it look weird.

Looks like of like super mario on acid?

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Old 05-03-2007, 02:27 PM

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Sunrays look like crap :/

Make em fade so you can't see the polygonal ends.

Idk man, it'd be cool if it was bigger.
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Old 05-03-2007, 06:27 PM

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the colors are too everywhere for my tastes. but the clouds look pretty badass.

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Old 05-03-2007, 07:19 PM

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Looks [kind] of like super mario on acid?
I like this assessment.

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Old 05-03-2007, 09:10 PM

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haha whats up with the rainbow loli pops?
*not talking*
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